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  1. dancindork17 dancindork17 is offline

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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 9:43pm)

    Kept trucking along with stand up. Here's a new video, thanks for checking out whether you hate it or love it.



    http://http://www.youtube.com/watch?...eature=related
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 9:45pm) in reply to dancindork17

    broken link. Take the url address, click that video button on p5s and paste in there for embed
     
  3. Donkey Kong Donkey Kong is offline it's on like me

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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 9:45pm) in reply to stackinsideways

    decent stuff

    its on like donkey kong bit was hurtful. i also like to play COD. fuck you
    Edited By: Donkey Kong Feb 24th, 2012 at 10:04 PM
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 9:47pm) in reply to dancindork17

    http://youtu.be/8LO6uv7q4Vg

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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 10:05pm) in reply to dancindork17

    I watched that with every intention of turning it off half way through cuz I figured it would suck.

    watched the whole thing and was pretty impressed.

    you have some skill. keep it up
     
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 10:13pm) in reply to stackinsideways

    Pretty good. Glad you're enjoying it. Takes a lot of nerve to do stand up
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 10:31pm) in reply to TheWhitePele

    some good quips but you need to work on a narrative and/or better transition points.
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 10:35pm) in reply to Mr Galt

    also you wouldve gotten huge laughs if you had said "this bitch will wooo anything" instead of what you said
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 10:51pm) in reply to Donkey Kong

    I really enjoyed it. Great job. If you ever came to Chicago I'd definitely meet the two drink minimum to watch you perform.
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 10:58pm) in reply to dolphin13

    Very impressed - well done. I might be using that Indian Style sex joke.

    Edit: That one guy's laugh was killing me.
    Edited By: KingPariah Feb 24th, 2012 at 10:59 PM
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 10:59pm) in reply to KingPariah

    great stand up wud b even better if u werent causing the guy filiming to laugh himself to death.. made it a little tuff to hear at times hahaha
     
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 11:05pm) in reply to cocoa_butter111

    pretty damn good. i sure as shit could never do that.
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 11:07pm) in reply to dolphin13

    This had me rollin'. Got a little bogged down in the middle, should have let the crowd keep being excited, seemed like you silenced the crowd too much by teasing her. Was still funny but you lost a shitload of momentum with the crowd and you had to work back up. All in all very enjoyable keep it up!
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 11:13pm) in reply to blackstar74

    I thought you ended better this time. Keep it up.
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 11:44pm) in reply to KingPariah

     
    Originally Posted by KingPariah View Post

    Edit: That one guy's laugh was killing me.

    +1


    Good job
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    Feb 24th, 2012 (2/24/2012 11:53pm) in reply to dank773

    I second stackin. Saw it was 15 minutes and was like nooooo way. Saw his comment and thought, maybe Ill try it. Glad I did. Was funny for sure.
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 12:08am) in reply to AbnormalQ

    "in case your wondering, we dont actually stock the mexicans at home depot" lol
    looooooooooooooool at the toilet set
    "did anyone ever have sex indian sytle?" im not giving the punchline, woth watching for that one
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 12:11am) in reply to Lameass_

    great job man, keep getting yourself out there
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 12:19am) in reply to Geoff Moore

    very good... change the camera man tho, haha. as said above he was pissin himself the whole time
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 12:27am) in reply to deadeyehank

    Lol, good stuff. The indian style line had me rolling. haha
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 12:27am) in reply to Bball23

    good stuff, liked the first half better
     
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 12:29am) in reply to Demitrius100

    nice job.

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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 12:41am) in reply to LeftyMark

    the Indian joke was outstanding and i loved how u did the "too soon" on it. that shit had me dying.
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 2:57am) in reply to SmokeyCasinos

    absolutely hilarious. not one g-d either. love it
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 3:15am) in reply to clwhat

    I cant watch in case I dont find it good I will then feel really uncomfortable but I wish you the best and I hope where ever comedy takes you makes you happy.
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 5:52am) in reply to Cesporz

     
    Originally Posted by Cesporz View Post

    I cant watch in case I dont find it good I will then feel really uncomfortable but I wish you the best and I hope where ever comedy takes you makes you happy.


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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 5:59am) in reply to Hateflops

    I thought it was good. A couple a really good lines and pretty decent interaction with the crowd. Id be impressed if I went to an amateur (no offense) hour show and you were up there. Only thing, not sure how wide the stage was, but move around a little. that stage looked small so it may not have been an option but just my .02.

    A side note, the guy either holding the camera or sitting right next to it, his laugh was gold and had me laughing at times I wouldnt have normally been. I gotta imagine that helps when watching your shit online for the extra lulz factor. Well done.
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 5:46pm) in reply to danimal703

    Awesome... "That one is $100...You can piss or shit in it...That one there is $200 & you can piss or shit in it."

    I misquoted but still well done haha.
    Edited By: GreesonEV Feb 25th, 2012 at 05:42 PM
     
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    Feb 25th, 2012 (2/25/2012 6:17pm) in reply to GreesonEV

    Pretty solid, like a sonic the hedgehog log
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